8 Ekim 2009 Perşembe
The polıce officer's day
One morning The police officer looks at the window in the office . He can't belives eyes because looks strange things .The police goes out , he sees the black smoke on the mountain. Then he goes his car and driving fast that is too fast for the curves .Because he thinks maybe someone wants help them.Then the police officer pulls over and stoops .He looks and relaxs so,the black smoke isn't frightful.
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dear my sıster... ı lıke syour story...but ı got ıt someone your sentences.. please you are angry.. because ı love you tulay sister...
YanıtlaSil''He can't belives eyes because looks strange things .''
YanıtlaSilCorrect is : He can't believes !his' eyes because !he sees strange things!.
''Then he goes his car and driving fast''
Correct is : Then he goes his car and he !drives! fast.
Because he thinks maybe someone wants !to! help them.
This story red-skin resemblance. Because; there is black smoke and mountains :)
YanıtlaSilhi tülay you homeworks are lack.so I don't be comments ok
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